Distribution of Subheadings
Since the text is quite long, subheadings should be used to improve the flow of reading. This helps readers scan the text more easily and find important information faster. Here is an example of a good distribution of subheadings:
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El Gouna: A Paradise on the Red Sea
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Main Attractions in El Gouna
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Leisure Activities and Adventures
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Popular Neighborhoods in El Gouna
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Frequently Asked Questions about El Gouna
Sentence Length and Shortening
38.5% of the sentences are too long. Shorten the sentences by splitting them into shorter, more concise units. For example:
Before:
“The resort dates back to 1990 when it was developed by the Eurascom Hotels Company.”
After:
“The resort was developed in 1990 by the Eurascom Hotels Company.”
Transition Words
To make the text flow more smoothly, add more transition words. Examples of transition words are: “in addition,” “moreover,” “furthermore,” “therefore,” “however.” For example:
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“El Gouna is a holiday resort in the city of Hurghada.”
After:
“El Gouna is a holiday resort in the city of Hurghada and is moreover a popular destination for water sports.”